I decided to critique the speech by Admiral Mcraven about changing your life. Mcraven's speech was very inspirational and touched many people. He had strengths and a few weaknesses during his speech. Now we are first going to start off with his strengths.
His first strength of his speech was he seemed very comfortable and had a good tone. I feel that he knew what he was talking about and although he may have been nervous speaking in front of all those people and cameras, he didn't show an ounce of nervousness. I feel that he also had a very strong attention-getter. He started off by saying starting your day off by making your bed is what everyone should do every day. I feel that it was kind of a funny attention-getter and seemed to tune everyone in.
He had very few weaknesses during this speech. The only thing I could critique about his speech was at the beginning he told the crowd that he was going to be going over ten different stories. Each of these stories have their own leadership lesson. He shared with the audience that he didn't know how long his speech would be. Although that could be a way to keep the audience engaged, I'm not sure it was the best thing to say.
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